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Minun's World - Page 1

Minun's World

Posted by: SloshedMail
Date: 2007-12-14 19:01:26
Before I start, this story was created in the 2005, and was a fine story.

Of course, the story might have bad grammar there, but I really don't want to hear people talk about it.

This story has 12 chapters. I'll probably post up to 5 times depending on the story.




The characters are listed here…

[spoiler3=Males]

Minun
Rhyhorn
Aron
Jumpluff
Nidoran Male
Castform
Pikachu
Zangoose
Venomoth
Zapdos
Vibrava
Gulpin
Numel
Seviper
Elekid
Mudkip
Machop
Growlithe
Dustox
Mawile
Sableye[/spoiler3]
[spoiler3=Females]

Plusle
Horsea
Nidoran Female
Poochyena
Magby
Breloom
Makuhita
Smoochum
Pichu
Shelgon
Mareep
Flaaffy
Vulpix
Articuno
Treecko
Zigzagoon
Wurmple
Torchic
Roselia
Cyndaquil
Hoothoot
Charmander
Seedot
Beautifly[/spoiler3]

Re: Minun's World

Posted by: SloshedMail
Date: 2007-12-14 19:01:57
…And then the story starts here.

[spoiler3=Chapter 1: Beginning! Frontier!]

It all started out at Minun's Secret Base. Everybody (At least 47) was in there having fun. Playing games, talking, being alone… Especially Plusle and Minun. Because of them, Pikachu was jealous. Everyone has some adventures they never went to. But their lives went upside down. Minun was going to his Secret Base because he was carrying some Oran Berries to share. Plusle was waiting for him to come to the base.

"Hey, Plusle." -Minun
"Hi, Minun! We're waiting for you at the Secret Base. Ready to come in?" -Plusle

Plusle blushed after this.

"Yes, I'm ready." -Minun

Plusle and Minun went to Minun's base. Everyone else was in, doing some play-time. Pikachu always greets Plusle with a kiss on a cheek, but it was different. He wasn't here! Minun was confused.

"Where did he go now?" -Minun
"How would you know? He's outside!" -Everyone else
'Then I better go and check on him. Maybe I'll battle him. This always happens…' -Minun

Minun then went out. Plusle followed him, without letting Minun know. He went to a forest, where he saw Pikachu. He was using Thundershock at a rock to see if it can break. Minun slowly came to Pikachu.

"Hi, Pikachu!" -Minun

Plusle was hiding on a bush to see what's going on.

"Hey, Minun!" -Pikachu

Pikachu was happy to see him. Minun was a little confused at first, but he came to him anyway. Pikachu, as a friend, shook his hand.

"It's nice to meet you at a time like this." -Minun

Plusle kept looking at Minun all times. She wasn't going to leave Minun for a minute. Pikachu took Minun in a darker forest, where lights came from the trees.

"So, Minun, have you jumped high yet?" -Pikachu
"Yeah, I did." -Minun

Minun jumped high, out of the trees. The sun was bright from him. Then he dissapeared. Plusle started to go where Pikachu was until Minun reappeared to her. She freaked out.

"Minun!" -Plusle
"Sorry… I just teleported out from the sun." -Minun

Pikachu was surprised from the teleport, then he was mad.

"Plusle… (Starts to build up electricity) You're mine…" -Pikachu[/spoiler3]
[spoiler3=Chapter 2: A Mark?! Minun's Big Secret!]

Minun's mark was a mystery from anyone who knows it.

"So, tell me how you teleported back here." -Plusle
"Well…" -Minun

Flashback

(Not on Chapter 1)

Minun jumped high out of the trees. Minun thought that the sun was blocking him from seeing anywhere else. He froze there, floating around. He then began to power up and his "Special" eye slowly opened. He disappeared from his spot to Plusle.

End Flashback

"Oh… It's because of that mark on your head…" -Plusle
"I know- Wait. You know my mark?" -Minun
"Nope! Never knew." -Plusle

Minun became a little embarrassed(If anyone knows the eye).

"Come on, Plusle. Let's go to my base and rest." -Minun

Plusle followed Minun back to the base. Plusle kept blushing at Minun. Pikachu was slowly spying on them if they was going to the next level.

"If only I could take Plusle while Minun is gone…" -Pikachu

Of course, Minun would hear something.

"What was that?" -Minun

Plusle was confused.

"What's what?" -Plusle
"Some sounds." -Minun
"I don't know what sounds are we hearing." -Plusle

Minun checked to see if nobody is around.

"Me neither." -Minun

They reached to Minun's base…

"I need to do something for a minute, Minun. I'll catch up later." -Plusle
"Okay. See you there!" -Minun

Minun went to his base after this. Plusle sat down on the grass. She kept blushing every time.

'Okay, Plusle. It's now or never. I can tell him or give him a mail for him telling him that I love him…' -Plusle

Pikachu started to use Agility and took Plusle to go somewhere else.

"Pikachu? W-what are doing?" -Plusle
"Taking you somewhere else!" -Pikachu

Minun saw what Pikachu did. He was looking at a window.

"Oh, man! How did Pikachu catch us up!" -Minun
"What are you saying?" -Vibrava
"Oh, nothing…" -Minun

Minun left his base and followed Pikachu where he was going.

"Oh, no you don't!" -Minun

Pikachu was shocked. He stopped using Agility and dropped Plusle.

"How did you come here fast!" -Pikachu
"Easy. Following you!" -Minun
"Minun, you are going to be out of this Picture later on!" -Pikachu

Plusle went behind Minun and watched what was going to happen…[/spoiler3]
[spoiler3=Chapter 3: The Battle For Plusle! Vs. Pikachu!]

Minun and Pikachu was about to battle. Minun would do this because of Plusle. Pikachu would do this because he hates Minun. So he could hurt him. Plusle was watching the battle start. She needed to go and get something for a minute.

"So, any last words before I faint you?" -Pikachu
"Yeah. Only one." -Minun

Pikachu stared at him for a minute.

"Draw!" -Minun

Minun used Spark at him. Pikachu dodged the attack and used Quick Attack to hit him. Minun felt the attack and was backed up. Minun thought that this was too easy and waited for the next attack. Pikachu was going for his next move, Slam. Minun teleported from next to behind him. Then he used Spark again. Pikachu was hit and fell down.

"This is too easy!" -Minun

But when he laughed, Pikachu used Thunderbolt. Minun was feeling the damage(Not that much) but Pikachu tackled him after the last attack.
Minun fell down after the hit.

"Is it easy now?" -Pikachu
"Yeah. It's still easy." -Minun

Pikachu used Slam to faint Minun but he quickly dodged it and got up.

Minun ran to him and disappeared again.

"Where did he go?" -Pikachu

Minun was floating on top of him and he Slammed him first. Pikachu's head hurted badly and couldn't get up.

?Give up, Pikachu!" -Minun

Pikachu slowly got up and grabbed Minun. He jumped up with him and done lots of front flips. He was ready for a Seismic Toss. Pikachu slammed Minun down very hard. Minun couldn't get up. His legs hurt more than anything.

"You need to give up." -Pikachu

Something happened to Minun. His "Special" eye slowly opened. Pikachu gasped that he had a third eye. The eye helped Minun use Hyper Beam at Pikachu. He was hit and was moving backward fast. Minun couldn't see him anymore.

He slowly got up and walked to Plusle but she was gone. He only found a mail that his name on it.

XxX

Dear Minun (If you're there)

I haven't told you the truth about me yet.
So I wanted to tell you this.
I love you…
If you see me, go to your base.

Love, Plusle

XxX


Minun was shocked about Plusle loving him. So he came to his base fast.

"Where's Plusle?" -Minun
"She's in your room…" -Rhyhorn

Minun started to go in his room. In his room, he had a bed, some dolls, and his own Gameboy Advance SP. He saw Plusle there, sitting on his bed.

"Plusle…" -Minun
"Have you read the mail yet?" -Plusle
"Yes…" -Minun
"Yeah… It's true…" -Plusle

Minun blushed.

"I love you too…" -Minun

He sat on his bed and they stared at each other for some seconds. Then Minun came closer to Plusle. They closed their eyes and started to kiss… Then their lips connected. It was a passionate kiss. Until somebody started to look at them kiss. They broke the kiss and blushed again.

"So, Minun… What's next?" -Plusle
"Nothing…" -Minun

The one that peeked at Plusle and Minun went away for a minute. Minun then fainted from Pikachu's attack. Plusle sent him in his bed to sleep.

"Have a nice sleep, Minun. I love you…" -Plusle

Meanwhile, Pikachu was flying away from the Beam. He landed where he was a very long way back to the Base…[/spoiler3]
[spoiler3=Chapter 4: Mysterious! Enter Pandora!]

Pikachu was lost from an unknown place. He couldn't find one thing that has a way to the base.

"Ugh… In this rate, I'll never make it…" -Pikachu

The next day, Minun woke up and got out of bed. He didn't know he fainted until he found the sky.

"Now what just happened here?" -Minun

Plusle came to his room and greeted him with a kiss.

"Hi, Minun. Had a nice sleep?" -Plusle
"Yeah, I did." -Minun

Plusle saw the sky that somebody was cutting the walls.

"What happened here?" -Plusle
"I don't know yet." -Minun

Minun climbed to the spot where Minun saw the walls and jumped out the base. He investigated the roof and the walls. He found somebody that was fainted. He came where it was.

"Oh, man…" -Minun

It soon got up and greeted him.

"Um… Where am I?" - ???
"You're at Pokemon World." -Minun
"Oh…" - ???
"Over here is my Secret Base." -Minun

Minun pointed where his base was.

"I can nearly fit there…" -?
"…" -Minun
"I'm Pandora. Nice to meet you." -Pandora
"I'm Minun." -Minun

Yep. He was Pandora. He was a person. Minun thought that he was like Pikachu but since he couldn't fit in the base, he wasn't him.

"So… Where can I see the other Pokemon?" -Pandora
"Later on. Better follow me." -Minun

Minun took Pandora to his base. Plusle looked at a window. She saw Pandora come here. Before Pandora was close to the base, Plusle attacked him.

"What are you doing here?" -Plusle

Pandora picked her up.

"Being your friend…" -Pandora
"Calm down, Plusle. He isn't the enemy!" -Minun

Since everyone else came where Plusle was, they all (Except Minun) gasped. They went back inside and stayed there. They were thinking that this is a bad dream so they'll wake up now. But Vibrava wasn't done yet. He came back outside and checked him.

"And who are you?" -Vibrava
"I'm Pandora. At least I'm very nice…" -Pandora

Pandora smiled as he laughed.[/spoiler3]





Re: Minun's World

Posted by: SloshedMail
Date: 2007-12-14 19:04:06
[spoiler3=Chapter 5: Explaining! Before Nothing Looks Ahead!]

Numel came outside to explore around. Pandora didn't notice Vibrava until he came out. Poochyena followed Numel around but Numel didn't see her until later on.

"Explain why are you here?" -Vibrava
"For being your friend." -Pandora
"And what's next?" -Minun

Pandora was shocked.

"GAH! I forgot! Hang on!" -Pandora

Pandora teleported somewhere else.

"Now what?" -Minun

Some minutes later, he came back with some Sitrus Berries. Everybody came out now. They wanted the berries because they were their favorites more than Oran. Everybody crowded on Pandora.

"…" -Pandora

He walked away because of the "Sitrus Berry" problem. Plusle backsmacked Vibrava on his head.

"Don't ever do that again!" -Plusle
"We need to go." -Minun
"Yeah. Because what Vibrava done to Pandora, I'm bored." -Plusle

Plusle and Minun left out to go somewhere.

"There was something that's in my mind…" - ???
"Hunh?" -Rhyhorn
"Plusle and Minun. They had their first time kissing…" - ???
"What happened?" -Mareep
"They were kissing in their room…" - ???
"…" -Everyone else

Later that day…

Poochyena ran to the bushes and watched Numel find some items. He kept finding some Charcoal to keep for himself. He found some more to make something.

"What a day… Sometimes I can't find anything else but one thing I want…" -Numel

Poochyena listened to everything he said.

"Poochyena…" -Numel

Poochyena gasped…

"Yeah… I do love you… But I don't want to tell you yet…" -Numel
"You don't need to tell me now." -Poochyena

Numel looked at the bushes to see that Poochyena popped out of them. Numel was shocked…

"I love you too…" -Poochyena

Poochyena ran to him and kissed him. Numel was surprised for now…

'Oh well…' -Numel

Numel closed his eyes and kissed her back. Somebody, the same as before, looked at them kiss (same thing as Plusle and Minun's first kiss).[/spoiler3]
[spoiler3=Chapter 6: Minun's 2nd Battle! Vs. Pidgeot!]

"So… What's next?" -Minun

Everyone else (Except Numel, Poochyena, and Pandora) was sitting on the grass, chatting.

"Nothing…" -Mareep
"Not even anything?" -Rhyhorn
"Nope…" -Mareep

Everyone looked where the forest was. The trees were being pushed by the wind. Until they seen an explosion. The explosion shocked everyone.

(SM: They were surprised. )

"Why this…" -Gulpin
"Come on!" -Minun

Rhyhorn, Mareep, Plusle, and Minun came to the explosion. They only saw smoke. A Hyper Beam was shot and hit Minun. Minun was badly wounded. He didn't move anymore.

"Minun…" -Plusle
"Ugh… Who has d-done this?" -Minun
"I… don't know…" -Plusle

As the smoke cleared, Plusle gasped. She saw Pidgeot… Pidgeot was 2 times bigger than Plusle. Plusle backed away and came to Minun.

"Are you alright?" -Plusle
"Yeah." -Minun

With some power left from Minun, he got up. Rhyhorn and Mareep was standing there, watching what Plusle and Minun would do.

"Why are you here?" -Minun
"To destroy you!" -Pidgeot

Pidgeot started the battle with Quick Attack. Of course, they dodged it. Plusle used Thunderbolt but Pidgeot dodged that with Agility. Minun used Tackle at Pidgeot and hit him but he didn't felt it! Then Pidgeot used Gust at Plusle and she being blown away. She fell down after the attack.

"He's too hard to beat…" -Plusle

It was Minun's turn. Same as what he battled Pikachu, he ran and disappeared. This time he was behind him and used Thunder at him. Pidgeot was shocked (badly). He was still standing, receiving the shock. He came to Minun and his wings glowed. His Wing Attack… hitted Minun and he stopped using Thunder. Minun fell after this.

"You're right, Plusle…" -Minun

Rhyhorn and Mareep was still watching them battle. They didn't want to see them faint so they came to them.

"Plusle… Minun… Are you alright?" -Rhyhorn
"I got an idea." -Mareep

Plusle and Minun got up and heard Mareep's idea.

"This might work!" -Minun
"But it's not going to work perfectly…" -Mareep and Plusle
"Hey!" -Mareep

Minun's hand touched Plusle's. Plusle's hand was on Mareep's wool. Rhyhorn attacked Pidgeot with Double Edge. Pidgeot was flying and crashed on the grass.

"Ready!" -Rhyhorn

Rhyhorn then fell on the grass. Plusle, Minun, and Mareep all used Thunder together. It hit Pidgeot and couldn't take it anymore. He fainted after 2 seconds.

"…" -Pidgeot

Minun wasn't done yet. He ran to him and grabbed him.

"Tell us why are you here!" -Minun
"I'm not telling you!" -Pidgeot

Minun smacked him.

"Tell us!" -Minun
"It's for Pikachu!" -Pidgeot
"Thanks…" -Minun

Minun threw him and Pidgeot flew away. Everyone's mouths were staring open.

"Come on, people." -Minun

Plusle and Minun were coming back to the base. Rhyhorn and Mareep were standing there staring at each other.

"Hey, you're coming?" -Plusle
"Yeah. Give us a minute." -Mareep

Plusle left and they were alone.

"Double Edge?" -Mareep
"Yeah…" -Rhyhorn

Mareep blushed.

"Rhyhorn, I like the way you battle so much…" -Mareep
"And I like the way you used Thunder…" -Rhyhorn
"I wanted to tell you this…" -Mareep

Rhyhorn kept looking at her. Mareep had sapphire eyes.

"I love you…" -Mareep
"I love you too…" -Rhyhorn

They were still staring at each other. They came closer and Mareep closed her eyes. Rhyhorn blushed but he followed her and closed his eyes too. But when they were about to kiss, it started to rain. They stopped and looked at the rain.

"Aww…" -Rhyhorn
"Come on, Rhyhorn…" -Mareep

Rhyhorn got up and walked Mareep back to the base, not knowing that something else would happen.[/spoiler3]
[spoiler3=Chapter 7: What Flies Around, Gets Their Mate!]

Rhyhorn and Mareep was a little soaked from the rain. They were in the base, together. As Minun told them about coming inside late, 2 flying Pokemon was looking at them having fun. They were Dustox and Beautifly. Although they were nice, they wanted to be alone, MORE than Plusle and Minun.

Dustox followed Beautifly out of the base from a window.

"Why did Pikachu do this!" -Minun
"Maybe he wants me…" -Plusle
"I know that…" -Minun
"This is bad…" -Rhyhorn
"What do you think, Mareep?" -Plusle
"Same as Minun…" -Mareep

Pidgeot stopped flying and came to Pikachu.

"Pikachu, Minun's ready…" -Pidgeot
"Okay…" -Pikachu

Pikachu was still in that lost place. He sometimes got on Pidgeot to see if the base is there. He would have revenge on Minun!

MEANWHILE…

Beautifly landed on sand, Dustox was next to her. Dustox's hand was on her, softly touching her. They were at a beach (Next from the darker forest). Beautifly was blushing every time Dustox touched her.

Some Pokemon from the water was having fun. A Sharpedo was jumping out of the water, like a Dolphin. Some Squirtles and Horseas used Water Gun to make a fountain/soaker.

"It's all perfect…" -Dustox

Dustox was still softly touching Beautifly. It was about to turn night (It's now sunset).

"Wow… I can get to see the sunset now…" -Beautifly
"It's just like the last time we seen it…" -Dustox

FLASHBACK

There were 2 Wurmples together. A sunset was going to start when the Female one gotten sleepy.

"Don't sleep now… It's starting…" - M. Wurmple

"I… know…" - F. Wurmple

Female Wurmple slept anyway.

END FLASHBACK

Dustox remembered about this and was blushing.

As they were watching the sunset, Dustox came closer. Beautifly started to look at Dustox, which was coming closer.

"Dustox, I-" -Beautifly

Dustox's hand touched Beautifly's lips.

"Shh… I know…" -Dustox

Both hearts were beating faster when they were about to kiss… As they kiss, it turned night.

Beautifly letted go of the kiss.

"I love you, Dustox…" -Beautifly
"I love you too…" -Dustox

As they looked at a full moon, a Hyper Beam was going to hit Dustox…[/spoiler3]
[spoiler3=Chapter 8: Secret Base under attack! Pidgeot's 2nd Arrival!]

Dustox gasped as the Beam almost hit him, but Beautifly pushed him and received the damage.

"(Acted like Vader) NNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!" -Dustox

Beautifly (In slow mode) fell down. Dustox's tears flowed down as he was saved, but as Beautifly slowly fainting.

"No… Don't faint… Not yet…" -Dustox

Beautifly was damaged… Her breathing wasn't good, neither. Dustox saw this Pokemon… Pidgeot!

"Are you Minun?" -Pidgeot

Pidgeot was in shiny version. His hair on his head was now yellow instead of red.

"No, but why did you hurt Beautifly!" -Dustox
"I didn't mean to… I thought you was Minun…" -Pidgeot

Pidgeot flew away knowing that those 2 were alone again.

"It's okay… I'll r-rest for today…" -Beautifly

Beautifly fainted after her last words. Dustox picked her up and flew to the base.

Pidgeot was at the base first. He decided that he would use Hyper Beam to destroy the base… and he did. Everybody woke up from the base. The top part (Upstairs) bursted into flames. Minun quickly got out and saw the base.

"But why…" -Minun

Plusle was out second.

"…" -Plusle
"Who has done this?" -Minun

As Plusle started to look at Minun, someone's wings badly hitted Minun. He landed on his knees, and then was down.

"Got you now!" -Pidgeot
"Oh, you again?" -Plusle
"Now it's complete!" -Pidgeot

Everybody came out to see what happened, even Pandora.

"But why…" -Pandora

Pidgeot backed everyone up by using Whirlwind. He then used Hyper Beam again. The base (All of the parts of the base) blowed up. Everybody gasped in dismay.

Pandora got up and quickly attacked him. Pidgeot's head moved as a dodge. Pidgeot used Wing Attack at Pandora, but he transformed to Graveler and used Rock Tomb. Pidgeot was stuck there for a moment.

"Too weak." -Pandora (As Graveler)

Pidgeot broke out from the attack and used Quick Attack. The attack wasn't good, anyway. He was backing up manually, mad. He screamed out loud for some seconds. Pikachu came out and used Thunder Wave at Pandora. Pandora didn't felt it, but he was paralyzed.

"Who is he?" -Pikachu
"Pandora." -Pidgeot

Pandora (As Graveler) transformed back. He was growling from the attack. Minun got up slowly as Plusle helped him.

"Pidgeot, take Pandora. I'll get Minun." -Pikachu
"Gotcha." -Pidgeot

The two splitted up as Pandora used Thunderpunch on his own. Pidgeot was flying from the attack and crashed down again (Just like Rhyhorn did). Pidgeot quickly got up and used Fly. Pandora countered it with Take Down.

On Pikachu's side, Minun used Tackle at him. Pikachu used Mega Kick to back Minun from his spot. Plusle took Pikachu's hand and threw him. Minun jumped up and exact timing, he used Mega Punch - backstabbing - at him. Pikachu didn't move for a while.

"Too easy!" -Pandora and Minun

Pikachu and Pidgeot backed up and they were back where they started.

"Darn…" -Pikachu
"We'll get you later on!" -Pidgeot

Pikachu was on Pidgeot and he flew away. Everybody's tears started to go out because they lost their home, Minun's base.

Pandora started to power up like CRAZY!

"Why did they do this?" -Pandora
"Hey, calm down! At least he didn't get his own base…" -Minun

Pandora started to calm down.

"We can find some more bases now." -Pandora
"Good idea." - Plusle

Everyone followed Pandora until there was a good base. Some hours of finding, and as the sun rises, Castform found one that was just like Minun's Base.

"Alright!" -Pandora
"But what are we going to name it?" -Plusle
"Pandora and Friend's!" -Minun[/spoiler3]

Re: Minun's World

Posted by: SloshedMail
Date: 2007-12-14 19:07:55
[spoiler3=Chapter 9: The Honor! Pokemon Love Fight!]

Everyone thanked Castform for finding a base for Pandora. Like Minun's base, it had more stuff.

Charmander, Seedot, and Hoothoot were in love for Castform but they didn't want to tell him. Charmander told Castform to stay in her home for today; He was tired. Since it was morning, Castform was now like the sun.

Hoothoot, and Seedot were at a window, looking what Charmander would do. Castform was in Charmander's room, chatting.

"This is just like home…" -Castform
"I know, Castform…" -Charmander
"I need to check what else here." -Castform

Charmander showed what else was in her home. She showed Castform her bathroom, kitchen, and her private room (Castform was allowed to go in).

"So, this is the room?" -Castform
"Yes." -Charmander

The room was very warm. Charmander had a bed (Very warm), some chairs, and a diary.

?Wow… I can't believe I'm in a private room…?-Castform

Charmander took Castform's arms and took him to her bed. Hoothoot pecked 2 holes so she, and Seedot can see what Charmander would do. Some minutes later, after talking (Knowing that they were staring at each other), Charmander touched him.

"Castform…" -Charmander
"Yes?" -Castform
"I love you…" -Charmander

Castform suddenly blushed.

"I love you too…" -Castform

Charmander was still touching Castform, until they kissed. Seedot and Hoothoot's hearts broke because of this.

"Why this?" -Seedot
"I don't know…" -Hoothoot
"I got a plan!" -Seedot

Hoothoot and Seedot talked it out for their plan. They wanted Castform (As Charmander did to him)… Some hours later, after the plan, and of what Castform would do, Hoothoot and Seedot had their first kiss with him. Later, Charmander started to go in her home until Castform was there.

"Hey, Castform." -Charmander

Seedot and Hoothoot came after Castform.

"Hiya, Charmander!" -Seedot
"How's everyone doing?" -Castform

All of the girls blushed. It's like Castform used Attract at them. At least they didn't say anything.

"Hm…" -Castform
"Seedot, we need to be going." -Hoothoot
"Okay. See you!" -Seedot

After they left, Charmander and Castform were alone again.

"Listen, Charmander. I've seen Seedot and Hoothoot today." -Castform
"You did?" -Charmander
"Yeah. After the kiss with you, they decided that they kissed me…" -Castform

Charmander's heart broke. Castform realized that he said it.

"Look, I have to go now. See you!" -Castform

Charmander stood there. She started to look where Seedot and Hoothoot was.

"Why YOU?" -Charmander

Charmander stormed to her home (And she stayed there for the night).

The next day…

It was morning again (11:00 to be right), Hoothoot was sleeping peacefully. Seedot was with Hoothoot, looking at the sky. Castform walked to Seedot and Hoothoot. He always says hi before he sits next to them. Charmander was behind the tree and the others. Since she was mad from yesterday, she would try to take Castform for herself. So she would faint Seedot and Hoothoot first. She started to use Flamethrower at the tree. Seedot and Hoothoot felt that it was warmer today. But when she looked up at the tree, it was on fire. Castform had to push those two out of the tree. They saw Charmander and were mad at her. Charmander wouldn't say anything unless what was she doing. Castform s e c r e t l y used Rain Dance. When it started to rain, the fire was out. Castform was now transformed to the water.

"What are you doing to my plan?" -Charmander
"I'm wondering what are you doing?" -Seedot
"You know what I want!" -Charmander

Castform stood there, looking at those three arguing.

"I can't take this anymore!" -Hoothoot

Hoothoot had to start it. She used Tackle at Charmander. Charmander grabbed Hoothoot before she was hit. Charmander used Mega Kick to send Hoothoot flying. Hoothoot stood there on the sky until she was going down. Then she would use Headbutt to make great damage. Charmander used Flamethrower to make Hoothoot slow down. Hoothoot crashed on the grass.

Seedot was next. She used Bullet Seed at Charmander, but Charmander used Ember to take out the seeds. Charmander used Tail Whip (Her tail attacked Seedot) and Seedot was knocked down.

"Humph…" -Charmander

Seedot slowly got up and used Bide. Charmander thought that this was Harden. So she used Slash at Seedot. Seedot felt it but she still stayed there. Charmander backed up then used Fire Blast at her. Dang, she was severely hurt. Seedot unleashed her power and Charmander was thrashed badly. Seedot breathed heavily and she fainted. Charmander still got up and grinned. Castform (Since it was still raining) had to do something. He used Weather Ball to make Charmander soaked. Charmander was coughing after Castform's attack.

"But… why?" -Charmander
"Because you didn't need to hurt Seedot and Hoothoot." -Castform
"I know you kissed them both but don't you like me?" -Charmander
"Look, I love you and those two, too. But if you still want me, don't hurt them." -Castform

The rain stopped. Castform was now himself again. Seedot and Hoothoot got up again.

"I just hope Charmander learned a lesson." -Seedot

They (Exept Castform) were tired. They had to go to their homes and rest. When Seedot and Hoothoot left, Castform gave Charmander a passionate kiss.

"See you." -Castform
"You too!" -Charmander

Castform waved at all of the girls as they left.[/spoiler3]
[spoiler3=Chapter 10: What's Pikachu doing? Magby's New Mate!]

It's from the Flashback, where Zapdos and Pikachu fled from the Double Battle with Pandora and Minun. Pikachu (Still in that lost place) sat down, sad.

"I'm sorry, Plusle… I only wanted you as your mate…" -Pikachu
"Who's there?" -???

A Pokemon that was like Magmar, but different, came out behind a standing log.

"Hi, I'm Magby." -Magby
"Oh… I'm Pikachu." -Pikachu
"Nice to meet you…" -Magby

Pikachu started to chat with Magby, a little happy.

"So, what IS this place?" -Pikachu
"This is the Lost World." -Magby
"Lost… World…?" -Pikachu
"It's where you'll get to have fun." -Magby

Magby showed an ice ride for any Pokemon less than 28 inches. Pikachu sat on the start of the ice. Magby told him to hang on; they also holded hands. Pikachu blushed. The ride was like down, fast, loop, up, loop, down, faster, jump, and then they landed on water. They laughed for lots of seconds.

"You're right, Magby." -Pikachu
"I know. It always happens." -Magby

They went to Haunter's Place (Haunted House?) and walked in.

"If you know, I'm not scared for any Haunters." -Pikachu

Magby headed to a picture. A Haunter reached his arm at Pikachu's shoulder. Pikachu was shocked more then paralization.

"M-m-Magby… I feel it…" -Pikachu

Pikachu fled out of the place. Magby followed him. When they were out, Pikachu was tired. Magby's hand touched Pikachu's shoulder. Pikachu gasped then blushed more.

"You know, Magby. There isn't really everything to have fun with." -Pikachu
"You sure?" -Magby
"Yeah…" -Pikachu

Pikachu's hand took Magby's. Magby instantly blushed.

From the base…

Minun sat outside. Plusle was with him, together. The winds blew lightly for the breeze.

"Anything you want to do before we get back inside the base?" -Minun

Plusle kissed Minun once again.


Back at the Lost World…

Pikachu started to sleep. Man, they had fun. Magby was sitting next to him, blushing. As Pikachu woke up, Magby came closer.

"How was your sleep?" -Magby
"Very nice…" -Pikachu

Magby stared at Pikachu for some seconds, and then she turned back.

"What's wrong?" -Pikachu
"It's love…" -Magby
"It's okay. It doesn't hurt you." -Pikachu

Magby turned back to Pikachu. Pikachu did something for Magby; he kissed her for a minute.

'Pikachu… You're my mate?' -Magby

Pikachu broke the kiss.

"Now I know how it is." -Magby

Pikachu got up then Magby did too.

"Come on… Let's go." -Pikachu

They walked out of the spot for more fun.[/spoiler3]
[spoiler3=Chapter 11: Rivals! Vs. Seviper!]

Under Construction from the late 2006. Sorry about that.[/spoiler3]
[spoiler3=Chapter 12: Final Thoughts! Pokemon War!]

Seviper was still at the sky, but he started to fall. He was now in the Lost World. As he was falling, he started to roll. He landed softly but he was still rolling, until he crashed on a tree. The tree fell on him and everything shaked. Pikachu and Magby were still kissing until they felt the shake. Pikachu broke the kiss then looked where Seviper was.

"What was that?" -Pikachu
"Don't know… Let's check it out." -Magby

They ran to where Seviper was, but Pidgeot was first.

He tried to wake him up, but from the roll, Seviper fainted.

XxX

Pandora was at the base. He couldn't find Minun; Minun hid from him. Plusle was with Minun. Pandora went inside the base and tried to find him. Even in Minun's room. Rhyhorn helped him but nothing was found. This was like hide and seek but almost like lost and found. Pandora was now where Minun is, but some feet away. He looked down and saw Minun. He was still kissing Plusle and had Pandora look back…

XxX

Pikachu found some Revives from the grass. The Reviver woke Seviper and noticed that that he was in Magby's home. Magby knew that he would wake up in this time. Seviper was asking where was Zangoose. He remembered that he was being throwned by him, but he was dizzy. After some time, Pidgeot had an idea?

"How about we start a team?" -Pidgeot

Magby whispered to Pikachu.

"Pikachu, would it be a good idea?" -Magby
"Yeah. No one can stop us when we have strong Pokemon to battle Pandora with…" -Pikachu
"Yeah… Pandora was unstoppable when I battled him!" -Pidgeot

Here's how it worked. Seviper is now on Pikachu's team. It's now 4 Pokemon..

XxX

Minun, after the kiss, climbed onto Pandora.

"Hmm… What were you doing?" -Minun
"Finding you. Then I saw you kissing Plusle." -Pandora
"Oh, come on… At least no one was look-" -Minun

A Poison Tail struck Minun in high speeds. Minun was five feet away from Pandora until Pidgeot took him away.

"Darn you! Let go of me!" -Minun

Pidgeot's feet, Minun was being held on, squeezed him. Minun was screaming out for help.


Here's now the bad news. Minun was captured, Plusle is in trouble, and Pandora doesn't know what to do.

XxX

Minun's eyes started to open. He was binded on 4 ropes. Two on both arms, two on both feet.

"So, are you awake now?" -Pidgeot
"Huh? Pidgeot, free me this instant!" -Minun
"Why should I free you?" -Pidgeot

(German language on)

"Because… Ich m?chte nicht jetzt gefangengenommen werden!" -Minun

Pidgeot was shocked… Minun learned it?

"Ich werde nicht Sie noch freigeben!" -Pidgeot

Minun looked at Pidgeot. Pidgeot learned it too.

(German language off)

"So, is he here?" -Pikachu

Pikachu was in where Minun didn't know where he was.

XxX

Pandora ran where Pidgeot has taken Minun. He wasn't happy by the moment. Plusle was with him, knowing what they would do to Minun. When they were there, Pandora stopped.

"Oh, no!" -Pandora

They were at Pikachu's castle! Minun never knew unless Pandora tells him.

He looked at a window to see Minun. Plusle gasped that Minun was being binded and hitted by Seviper's Poison Tail! She backed away and tears flowed out.

"How… dare… they… do this?" -Plusle

Rhyhorn was behind them, suddenly.

"What-" -Rhyhorn

When Rhyhorn looked where Minun was, he screamed.

"Minun… How did he get there?" -Rhyhorn
"Plusle knew this." -Pandora

Rhyhorn found the door for the castle. Plusle wanted to destroy those who hurted Minun.

"Let's break in!" -Pandora

Pandora's Hyper Beam and Plusle's Thunder broke the door. Rhyhorn ran in, following Pandora then Plusle.

XxX

Seviper stopped what he was doing and noticed that the door broke.

"Looks like Pandora's in." -Seviper

Pikachu and the others got out the room and saw Pandora, Plusle, and Rhyhorn.

"Ugh… Have to get out…" -Minun

Minun was in bad condition. His "Special" eye freed Minun. He then slowly walked to a window from that room where Pandora and the others were.

"Why are you interrupting us?" -Pikachu
"We want Minun back!" -Pandora

Minun crept to Pandora.

"(In a low voice) Minun!" -Pandora

"Why…" -Minun

Pandora used Recover to heal Minun. Pikachu gasped loudly and was angry.

"That's IT!" -Pikachu

The Pikachu team started to attack Pandora.

At least Rhyhorn took Pidgeot, Pikachu taking Minun, Magby taking Plusle, and Seviper taking Pandora.

The battle was short. Pikachu's team couldn't take the power that Minun and Pandora had. Pidgeot flew where they had the bomb. As Pidgeot activated it…

"So, you can't escape now!" -Pidgeot

"We can!" -Minun

Minun took Pandora, Rhyhorn, and Plusle's hand, then they teleported out. Pidgeot was shocked.

"Nice job, Pidgeot!" -Pikachu

They all ran out of the castle and saw it blown up.

XxX

Minun safely was back at Pandora's base. They were still floating until his eye closed. He stopped floating, then fainted.

"Minun!" -Plusle

Pandora picked him up and took him to his new room. He took him to his bed, putted him down, then he left.

Some days later…

Plusle woke Minun up. She was surprised that he was okay.

"Plusle…" -Minun

They both kissed. Pandora looked at a window.

"He's awake…" -Pandora

(Yeah, it all ended out at Pandora's Base. Everybody (At least 47) was in there having fun. Playing games, talking, being alone… Especially Plusle and Minun. Everyone has some adventures they never went to, and now they are now safe once again.)[/spoiler3]

Re: Minun's World

Posted by: SloshedMail
Date: 2007-12-14 19:10:50
Then comes the revised ver. of the story.

Just a little warning though, this is Pandora's POV only. It has no To Be Continued, so it's probably a forever story still being created.

[spoiler3=Revised Version! Minun's World!]

It all started on my mansion. Pikachu (Male) was building stuff in the lab.

Pikachu: How's it going there?
Me: It's going great!

Zapdos (Male), on the other side in the lab, was wearing a helmet. He couldn't take it off so it was draining his energy.

Zapdos: Hey, I need help, Pandora!
Me: Alright.

I took off the helmet in a flash. Zapdos thanked me for the help. Plusle (Female) was next to me, even though that I didn't see her.

Plusle: Hey, want to draw some pictures?
Me: *Without looking at Plusle* I'll go and draw. Just hold on.

I walked to the Picture Room, where a lot of Pokemon was just drawing and talking at the same time. Minun (Male) saw Plusle and did the usual… I saw them kiss and just fainted looking at them. Every other Pokemon was already looking at me from the faint.

Dusclops (Female): Pandora, you're back!
Charmander (Female): *Gave me paper* Are you ready?
Me: Yeah, sure.

LATER, when I was a little tired of drawing, I stopped and checked my pictures. It was a Milotic, Remoraid, and Dragonite. Everyone was shocked on how much I was drawing (Even though I can't draw that much), and was cheering at me. Seadra (Female) was next to me, but she was closer than I expected. But I knew what to do… I took her hand, and we disappeared. Some seconds later, we teleported back to the Picture Room, but they didn't know I was Seadra, too. So, I did a secret move… Transform. I was back to myself and was happy.

Me: Tada!

Everyone was surprised on my transform, so I just left so they can stop noticing me. I was outside of my Mansion, on the back. Zapdos and Pikachu were arguing on a Taillow (Female) to see if she's asleep. I had to stop this, so I transformed to a Taillow. I flew to the female and woke her up. We both flew away somewhere else and I was back in the Mansion, suddenly. I didn't know I had Teleport, too.

I was sitting in the Movie Section. Pidgey (Male) was next to me, just talking. We were watching the latest "Pokemon Love!" (Listed on the first post if you didn't read it). Taillow, the one I woke up, was coming here and started to chat with Pidgey. He was shocked, and started to talk to me.

Pidgey: You saved Taillow!
Me: From what?
Pidgey: From a sleeping crisis!
Me: …Um…

THE NEXT DAY, I closed my Mansion, and started to travel. Minun was next to me, but I didn't know. Minun made a loud scream, and I fell down without question.

Minun: Want to join me in my Secret Base? We're having a party.
Me: My ears… I'll catch up to you, just go.

12 minutes, I recovered and went to the base…

MINUN'S SECRET BASE… where I got in and saw other Pokemon playing in there. I couldn't move, since I was nervous. Pikachu was the first one to notice me…

Pikachu: No way…

Everyone, except Plusle and Minun, heard Pikachu's voice and looked at the front door. They saw me and stopped what they're doing. Numel (Male) was very shy and couldn't come where everyone else was now. Minun went next to me and announced that I'm new. Vibrava (Male) started to chat with me, and then it was Spheal (Female). Without noticing, Plusle and Minun went outside…

OUTSIDE, Plusle and Minun were having fun in a little park. They went to the swings and started to go high. First was Plusle. She got out of the swings (She was still up high) and did a flip. She landed, but cratered a bit. Next was Minun. He got out of the swings and used Thunderbolt. He was using this for spins and softer landings. He stopped using this and landed with his hands. Minun smiled and was standing normal.

Almost far away from the park, I was there, looking at those two having fun. Pikachu was next to him, but he was a little sad.

Me: Alright, what's wrong, Pikachu?
Pikachu: Nothing… It's just that when I loved Plusle, I thought she might love me back. But Minun came and she liked him better than I liked Plusle…
Me: Aww… Better luck next time?
Pikachu: Yeah…

Pikachu left the park and I was alone, far away from the lovebirds…

THE NEXT DAY, everyone was back in the base, watching movies. It took long to end it, but it was worth it. I tried to go outside, but Minun stopped me and touched me on the head. Suddenly, wings went out of my back.

Me: Um… How?
Minun: It's one of my powers, just giving it to you.
Me: Oh. How can it work?
Minun: Just think that you want to fly, or something.
Me: Alright. Thanks a lot!

I continued to go outside and I saw a girl standing there. I passed her but she transformed to a Charizard and used Flamethrower at me. I still heard it and dodged the attack quickly. I transformed to a Blastoise and used Hydro Cannon at her.

Me: What are you doing, trying to burn me?
Girl: Ugh, just stay back.
Me: Um, I'm one of you…
Girl: Oh? Sorry, I'm kind of new here. Call me Kimberly. What's yours?
Me: I'm Pandora. Sorry, but I'm in a hurry now.

I left the base, finally. Later, I started to build a little park for the Pokemon. Numel (Male) was watching me build. Some hours, I was done and was going to name it. Numel wanted to name it, but I was the only one to name it.

Numel: Dang, I wanted to name it.
Me: Too bad.
Numel: …
Me: Okay, since I only made a Shiftry there…. How about Shiftry Candy?
Numel: …Yeah, it's better than mines. Even though I was going to say it.
Me: Alright.

I announced the others to come in the park and have fun. I didn't go to the park yet, but I went back to the base and wrote a list…

THE NEXT DAY, since everyone had fun on the place called "Shiftry Candy", only Venomoth (Male) and Shelgon (Female) was outside. They were talking, and then shared their first kiss. I was behind them, on top of a tree. While Shelgon was still kissing Venomoth, she broke it and used Fire Blast on the tree. I fell since the tree just burned out. They, not me, both laughed at me. I used Recover and went out.

BACK IN MINUN'S BASE, there was a Pokemon battle occurring in the base. I noticed this, and went to Minun.

Me: Alright, what's all of this?
Minun: It's the PKMN* Battle event.

(PKMN: Pokemon)

Me: Hm… I forgot about playing my Pokemon Emerald in months. I better get ready.

Zapdos (Male, look on top) was wanting a practice battle against me. I got ready for the battle by adjusting my Pokemon… The video opened and…


~~~

Pandora takes out Armaldo! (HP: 299)
Zapdos takes out Raichu! (HP: 248)

Armaldo used Ancientpower. (HP for Raichu: 128)
All stats increased!

Raichu used Mega Punch. (HP for Armaldo: 271)
Not very effective…

Armaldo used Earthquake. (HP for Raichu: 0)
Super effective!
Raichu fainted!

Zapdos takes out Swampert! (HP: 315)

Armaldo used Earthquake. (HP for Swampert: 141)
Critical hit!

Swampert used Muddy Water. (HP for Armaldo: 1)
Super effective!
Armaldo hung on using Focus Band!

Armaldo used Earthquake! (HP for Swampert: 0)
Swampert fainted!


Pandora won against Zapdos!


~~~


Yeah, I won the battle, but that wasn't the end of the fun… Later, I was outside. Zapdos was talking to me about the battle.

Zapdos: Your Armaldo is too good! How did you made it so strong?
Me: I trained it. Easy, no?

I looked in the sky. It started to snow for some reason…

Me: Articuno?
Zapdos: Yeah, Articuno (Female).

Outside was three Pokemon. Zigzagoon (Female), Wurmple (Female), and Treecko (Female). Since it was cold out, they went inside the base to warm themselves up. I had nothing to do in that day, so…

THE NEXT DAY, I woke up and was about to go outside. I saw Kimberly and she was playing Pokemon FireRed. I asked her for a battle to see if my Armaldo (The one who battled and won against Zapdos) could make a second win. After the battle, Kimberly won. I didn't know how, since she used a Raticate and killed me.

Kimberly: Nice try… Probably when I beat Zapdos, I might be the champ…
Me: Yeah.

I went outside - The battle was 9 minutes long - and smelled the fresh air. I got tackled my Minun, and I fell. Minun gave me a box…

Minun: Hurry, hide this box!
Me: And why is that?
Minun: It's actually for Plusle, but I don't want to show her this.
Me: Oh, alright then.

I went to the base and hid that box in Minun's room. I suddenly ran to the forest, where I saw Articuno, Smoochum (Female), Elekid (Male), and Vulpix (Female). Articuno fainted from getting spinned on by Zapdos, but I didn't know this yet. I uncovered the bush and saw Breloom (Female) and Seviper (Male) sleeping together.

Me: Don't tell me…
Elekid: Yeah, they're together.

The two woke up, yawned, and saw the others. They walked to us, but I was growling a little mad.

Me: Don't worry, we didn't see anything. We all just went here and saw you for 9 seconds…
Breloom: Sorry, but did anyone see Zangoose here?
Me: *Stopped* Um… *Points to the Secret Base* Over here.
Breloom: Thanks.

Breloom and Seviper went to the base and saw Minun walking around. Before I EVEN went to Minun, he ran and saw three Red Potions. He tried to get the potions, but he somehow tripped on something. Minun was still on the grass, trying to get up. Some vines suddenly made Minun stuck.

Minun: Now what's this…?

Minun tried to look up, but a Thunder crashed on him. He felt it, but not that much. After it ended, Pikachu was next to him.

Minun: Pikachu… What… are you… doing…?
Pikachu: I'm sick and tired of keeping Plusle away from me! So, I'll be taking her when I'm done with you!

I was the only one to see Minun and Pikachu. I teleported to them, but I was behind Pikachu without noticing. I, then, used Blizzard at Pikachu, and he was frozen solid. I undid the vines, to let Minun go.

Me: You're okay?
Minun: Not that much…

Minun started to walk back to his home, but he fell and fainted himself. I sighed and picked him up. I walked to Minun's home and dropped him to his bed.

Me: Saved the day for once…

I left out, but saw Pikachu walking back to his OWN base. I had to stop him by using Hyper Beam. The beam crashed on Pikachu and he was knocked back on a tree. Pikachu got up and saw me, then used his Hyper Beam. I used Reflect and the beam went back to Pikachu. He couldn't take it, and started to faint. I threw Pikachu away and far away from his base, to somewhere else.

Me: Saved the day again.


THE NEXT DAY, Me and Minun was picking some Sitrus berries to make PokeBlocks. Of course, Minun was slow.

Me: Aren't you going to go faster?

Minun was growling at the berries, but another eye opened up on his head. I saw him, and gasped. Minun took all Sitrus berries out of the trees, and I was the only one to get squished by it. Minun went back to normal and looked at me…

Minun: Um… what's wrong with you?
Me: Uh… Nothing.

I went back to the base and went to the Berry Blender. I put in a Sitrus Berry and started to press buttons. The machine started and an arrow moved on the middle of the blender. I kept pressing buttons, and the machine went faster. After some minutes, it stopped and out came a Red PokeBlock. I ate it, but it was spicy. I quickly ran out to get some water…

LATER, Zapdos went to the base again, and went to me again.

Zapdos: Let me battle you again!
Me: Alright. *Checks SP* Oh, sorry. My batteries are running out.

Zapdos took my SP, and the charger. He used Thunder at the charger and suddenly, my SP was full power.

Zapdos: Here.
Me: *Stares at Zapdos* Okay… Thanks.

The video starts to open…

~~~

Pandora takes out Blastoise! (HP: 281)
Zapdos takes out Pelliper! (HP: 345)

Blastoise used Mega Kick. (HP for Pelliper: 1)
Critical hit!
Pelliper hanged on using Focus Band.

Pelliper used Rain Dance.
It started to rain.

Blastoise used Surf. (HP for Pelliper: 0)
Not very effective…
Pelliper fainted!

Zapdos takes out Rayquaza. (HP: 451)

Blastoise used Ice Beam. (HP for Rayquaza: 12)
Super effective!

Rayquaza used Thunder. (HP for Blastoise: 0)
Super effective!
Blastoise fainted!

Pandora takes out Raticate. (HP: 273)

Rayquaza used Outrage. (HP for Raticate: 192)

Raticate used Hyper Fang. (Missed)
Raticate's attack missed!

Raticate used Quick Attack. (HP for Rayquaza: 0)
Critical hit!
Rayquaza fainted!


Pandora won against Zapdos!

~~~

The video closed and Zapdos was very sad. I won again, but I was TOO good to do anything.

Zapdos: Nice job… I wanted to give you this…

*Obtained a Rayquaza poster!*

Me: A poster?
Zapdos: Yeah, it's rare to get.

Zapdos and I were shaking hands, and went out. Zapdos flew to his home, and I went to walk for a while. I found Plusle and Minun, but Plusle had an egg. She was still kissing Minun, since she had a great time with him. After five minutes, even though I was still looking at him, the lovebirds slept.

Me: Alright. I don't want this egg go cold…

I went to Minun's base and left it in my bed…



Well, I went back outside. Everything looked normal out there, but I know that Plusle and Minun would be a great family. But when I checked to see if they were gone, it wasn't true. They were still sleeping like angels, just gonna do something romantic once again.

I checked my SP once more, and played Blue.

Zapdos, once again, flew next to me asking for another battle.[/spoiler3]

Re: Minun's World

Posted by: SloshedMail
Date: 2007-12-14 19:11:51
And that's probably it. I will keep updating this page by every post I can come up with, also telling the info about it.