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The Final Solution - Page 6

Re: The Final Solution

Posted by: Don Watermeleon
Date: 2007-07-06 10:25:50
If you so badly were concerned with the facts of this story, you should have pointed out that I do not have a watermlon for a head, and Deokishisu isn't some weird rapper. I apologize if you do not like your part in the story, but, as even as you parade around on Gammapedia, if you don't like it, you most likely should not read it.

Re: The Final Solution

Posted by: Abwayax
Date: 2007-07-06 10:34:33
Except that you like to claim that the Gammapedia is just a vehicle for getting "revenge" on you. Which is not true - you're the one who's trying to get revenge, and it doesn't even mention you anymore (The Book of Abb, which was moved to abwayax.com, isn't part of Gammapedia). This story, while it may be fictional, looks like it was written because you want to imagine yourself looking victorious over your "enemies". The Gammapedia, while it does build a fictional universe like this story does, is much deeper than simply "lol look at me im pwning the evil terrorists"

Re: The Final Solution

Posted by: FooBot
Date: 2007-07-06 11:20:34
gah, i think we all need to understand that both are works of fiction and that no one need to get offended by any of it or take a stand anywhere because of it, its an entertaining story people!!!

Re: The Final Solution

Posted by: Don Watermeleon
Date: 2007-07-06 12:00:39

Except that you like to claim that the Gammapedia is just a vehicle for getting "revenge" on you. Which is not true - you're the one who's trying to get revenge, and it doesn't even mention you anymore (The Book of Abb, which was moved to abwayax.com, isn't part of Gammapedia). This story, while it may be fictional, looks like it was written because you want to imagine yourself looking victorious over your "enemies". The Gammapedia, while it does build a fictional universe like this story does, is much deeper than simply "lol look at me im pwning the evil terrorists"


The Knights who say Meh were changed to "Terrorists" in retrospect of an article from Pokeshine Wiki, and having two Knight organizations would get confusing. Eventually, Lee Nader ends up "pwning" me and all of my Knights, you merely need to have patience.

And if you find my story so offensive, as I suggested earlier, you don't truly have to read it. Thank you for your support, Foobot.  :)

Re: The Final Solution

Posted by: FooBot
Date: 2007-07-06 12:23:33
pshh i support every1 calming the f__k down

Re: The Final Solution

Posted by: Don Watermeleon
Date: 2007-07-06 15:25:01
Indeed so. Such hostilities over a mere novel are totally unnecessary.

But on a positive note, I think I'll try to deliver Chapter 4 sometime today, or at least early tomorrow.  :)

Re: The Final Solution

Posted by: Abwayax
Date: 2007-07-06 17:43:06
It's not a novel, and I'm not saying I'm "offended" at all.

Re: The Final Solution

Posted by: FooBot
Date: 2007-07-06 18:31:35
well it could be a novel even if it is short, chapters make it a novel I think (not sure though)

Re: The Final Solution

Posted by: Abwayax
Date: 2007-07-06 18:48:15
A novel (from French nouvelle Italian "novella", "new") is an extended, generally fictional narrative, typically in prose.


So I suppose, being fictional and prose, that it could be considered a "novel"… but I don't think it's extended enough. A novella is shorter than a novel but is defined by some important body of experts as "having a word count between 17,500 and 40,000 or 60 to 130 pages." I don't think The Final Solution is there yet.

Re: The Final Solution

Posted by: Don Watermeleon
Date: 2007-07-06 18:55:29
Of course it's not there yet, but I plan to have it become rather legnthy eventually. I need only time.

Re: The Final Solution

Posted by: FooBot
Date: 2007-07-07 21:45:45

But on a positive note, I think I'll try to deliver Chapter 4 sometime today, or at least early tomorrow.  :)


gah hurry up XD

Re: The Final Solution

Posted by: Don Watermeleon
Date: 2007-07-07 21:49:48
I have actually decided to temporarily discontinue The Final Solution due to quite a bit of negative criticism. Obviously, some people here don't seem to enjoy gruesomely dying. Oh well, I particularly liked the story.  :-\

Re: The Final Solution

Posted by: FooBot
Date: 2007-07-07 22:43:51
well that sucks gruesome deaths are fun yall
and censorship isnt cool
unless it get u a warnometer for posting it i say continue
people who dont like it
dont read it

so object to it ending
http://objection.mrdictionary.net/go.php?n=2052198

Re: The Final Solution

Posted by: Abwayax
Date: 2007-07-07 22:53:06

u

Erm…

*pulls quote from hidden mods only thread*


The member "Foo Bot" has such bad english and grammar skills that I can not understand his posts. even though Foo Bot is the worst, several other members have dismal english and grammar skills. I believe that Foo Bot has broke rule number ten, same goes for several other people. Also in my option Foo Bot has broken rule's number four and five. I believe that some action should be taken as this is really starting to piss me off.


I still don't see what's so hard about typing "you", capitalizing a few letters, using apostrophes and the like, etc. I'm serious here… just because you're my friend shouldn't put you above the rules.

Re: The Final Solution

Posted by: FooBot
Date: 2007-07-08 02:19:07
sorry I have actually stopped 3 or 4 times recently and retyped words in posts I am trying to remember

edit: after re-reading the rules i find grammer is stated in more than 1 rule maybe it should just be its own rule instead of in 2 or 3 rules

cause someone would be burninated for just breaking grammer rules once if all the rules on it were pulled in