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THE FINAL SOLUTION *CONTINUED* - Page 2

Re: THE FINAL SOLUTION *CONTINUED*

Posted by: Don Watermeleon
Date: 2008-01-05 16:53:46
lol, cool. How do you think you'll die.

Though again, your character hasn't been used yet (He'll be appearing as a major character Chapter 7 and on). After about 3 more Pylons are taken by either Don Watermeleon or Lee Nader, I assure you you'll have a pretty good idea about your death though.

But a few Knights are probably going to die before you, and probably a bunch of non-Knights too. Shame, so much death. :(


Also, I have a semi announcement to make. Chapters 1 - 6 were more like a prologue, and Chapter 7 will begin the new story arc (I actually have most of the story planned out from right now to the end, though I'll probably make changes as the story continues). It will follow the epic adventure of the Knights' mission to capture all of the Pylons, and Lee Nader's attempts to stop them because Don Watermeleon having all the Pylons = Apocalypse. And I'll through in about 2-3 major plot twists as more Pylons are found.

But anyway, I've been experimenting with chapter text colors as I've been writing these, but I've finally decided that certain text colors are going to base around certain characters are groups. Chapters written in a certain color with be about a certain person. The colors used on Chapter 1 - 6, though, don't follow any color scale and the colors should be disregarded.

This color will symbolize a chapter following Lee Nader.

This color will symbolize a chapter following Don Watermeleon, Cheddar, and Deokishisu.

This color will symbolize a chapter following Yuzi, Kannon, and Divine E.

This color will symbolize a chapter following any chapter about the Knights that doesn't include Don Watermeleon or Yuzi, or one where Don Watermeleon and his High Knights are with Yuzi and his High Knights.

This color will symbolize a flashback (A few of these are coming soon).

And this color will symbolize a filler chapter, or about someone completely unrelated to Lee Nader or the Knights.

The reason for the seperate colors for Don Watermeleon and Yuzi are because a little later on, they'll split up to search for the Pylons, though they'll still both be working for the Knights. It'd get confusing if they both had the same color. When they're together, they'll use the traditional Knight color, as explained above.

Re: THE FINAL SOLUTION *CONTINUED*

Posted by: FooBot
Date: 2008-01-05 17:05:35
Bah we knights were to proud to have ever submit to you  XD
I totally would have fougt to the end if you had invaded my sanctum  :P

good story telling though

Re: THE FINAL SOLUTION *CONTINUED*

Posted by: Don Watermeleon
Date: 2008-01-05 17:11:56
Considering that if I would have written this chapter back in July as I intended, I had originally planned to blow up Gammapedia and you and Abwayax with it. I editted my storyline a bit to be the slightest bit nicer.  ;)

Hm, I wonder how many chapters I'll need to write before TFS become a worldwide phenomona with fansites and crazed members who feel that Cheddar could zOMG pwn every character in the story. Soon enough, I'll be getting a TFS Manga, then an Anime, then a shoe line, then a deranged terrorist group naming themselves after the Knights. Yep, this story is cool.  8)

Re: THE FINAL SOLUTION *CONTINUED*

Posted by: fivex
Date: 2008-01-05 17:32:14
I have a question, when will my character be in the story?

Re: THE FINAL SOLUTION *CONTINUED*

Posted by: Don Watermeleon
Date: 2008-01-05 17:35:02
I'm going to try to do my best to include everyone from GCL in the story. Though you had an interesting character, and I probably won't include you as a ball. But you will appear with time.

Re: THE FINAL SOLUTION *CONTINUED*

Posted by: Yuzihax
Date: 2008-01-05 17:56:26

lol, cool. How do you think you'll die.


Well, I think my character will die when the time when I left the Knights comes in to play, and will be killed for such.

Re: THE FINAL SOLUTION *CONTINUED*

Posted by: Don Watermeleon
Date: 2008-01-05 18:05:58
Well there's no guarentee that you'll leave the Knights, technically, as really the only part of TFS based on real life are character names, personalities, and locations.

But I'm not going to say you won't commit treason either. Because if you did, that'd be a fairly major plot twist. What happens will happen.  :)

Re: THE FINAL SOLUTION *CONTINUED*

Posted by: LedZeplin2
Date: 2008-01-05 18:08:42
Ernie is screwed as well, right? You're going to live, or are you fucked too?

Re: THE FINAL SOLUTION *CONTINUED*

Posted by: Yuzihax
Date: 2008-01-05 18:12:22
Okay then.
(Knows he's somewhat right, even if you don't say otherwise.)

Re: THE FINAL SOLUTION *CONTINUED*

Posted by: Don Watermeleon
Date: 2008-01-05 18:18:50

Ernie is screwed as well, right? You're going to live, or are you f**ked too?


Ah, yes, Ernie. I was planning the most horrid death for him…  XD I planned to trap him in a 6x6 room with an angry Lee Nader. My god, I feel sorry for you…  :-\

But in all seriousness, I have to honestly say I don't remember exactly who Ernie was (I'll go look at him in the Character Submittal thread after I post this), but unless he openly opposed either the Knights or Lee Nader, he probably won't be killed. Actually, probably most characters are going to live. Not sure exactly why everyone's focused on the whole death aspect of the story, I was just saying that bad guys are going to die, and good guys who are not super main characters probably will get killed by the Knights.

Of course, in the off-chance that Don Watermeleon quits his conquest to gain all 6107 PYlons, he will live. But if he continues his ways, then he'll die. Haven't quite decided if he's ever going to switch to the good side eventually, and when I do, I probably won't tell anyone the asnwer.  :P

If he does switch sides, though, it'll be in a long time.

Re: THE FINAL SOLUTION *CONTINUED*

Posted by: LedZeplin2
Date: 2008-01-05 18:25:35
Ernie's full powers are unknown. He seems to have randomly changing powers.

Re: THE FINAL SOLUTION *CONTINUED*

Posted by: Missing? NO!
Date: 2008-01-05 19:40:54
I hope I am in a chapter soon!

Re: THE FINAL SOLUTION *CONTINUED*

Posted by: Don Watermeleon
Date: 2008-01-06 15:38:30
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Re: THE FINAL SOLUTION *CONTINUED*

Posted by: Yuzihax
Date: 2008-01-06 15:51:01
Me with silver hair? Damn straight!
Anyway, I'm certainly the interesting character, I dare say, XD.

Re: THE FINAL SOLUTION *CONTINUED*

Posted by: FooBot
Date: 2008-01-06 16:06:16
nice , but i had a hard time picturing a statue that big inside lol XD