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THE FINAL SOLUTION *CONTINUED* - Page 6

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Posted by: Don Watermeleon
Date: 2008-02-29 17:29:21
Newo, you're coming in for the next Knight chapter. Unfortunately, we have about 2-3 chapters left in GCL before I can split back to what Don Watermeleon and pals are up to.

And Foobot, you will actually be black once I get to re-writing the first 4 chapters, which will hopefully be before you appear again in the series. If, unfortunately, you're shown before I re-write them, I'll just make it assumed that everyone knows how the first 4 should be, and write you into your new race.

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Posted by: Divine E
Date: 2008-03-06 13:52:35
Hope ya don't mind, but I have been posting the story on my site. lol.  It is a very good story, you have a great talent for writing.

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Posted by: Deokishisu
Date: 2008-03-06 22:25:22
His story is the Epic Novel of love, peace, war, mystery and above all awesomeness.

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Posted by: Don Watermeleon
Date: 2008-03-07 18:53:47
Yeah, I noticed that Divine E, and I think it's great you're posting in on your site. Perhaps it'll make more people like it. :)

And anyhow, Chapter 10 should come out tomorrow. I know I've made a lot of promises, but I will promise to demote myself from Member+ if Chapter 10 doesn't come out this weekend. And that's something I'd definately not want to do… :P

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Posted by: Deokishisu
Date: 2008-03-07 21:44:25
Yes can't wait until then!!

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Posted by: Don Watermeleon
Date: 2008-03-08 15:57:23
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Posted by: FooBot
Date: 2008-03-08 16:17:49
Nice job, but what about the whole in Lee's Gut?  :D
I look forward to the next chapter (-:3

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Posted by: Newo
Date: 2008-03-08 16:20:37
It seems to be OK spelling-wise, and a good chapter as well.

If you want to seperate sections you could use the horizonal rule [img]http://forums.glitchcity.info/Themes/default/images/bbc/hr.gif[/img]


Anyway, it is a good story, and you get a lot of inside jokes and such in it.

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Posted by: Don Watermeleon
Date: 2008-03-08 16:22:19
Well, he's freaking Lee Nader. Anything that won't kill him he can take. :P

I might have him bandage himself up though, or something. The next chapter's going to be interesting, but weird, and after that we'll focus on the Knights and have Don Watermeleon do something pretty cool. I too am equally excited for the next chapter, and hope I get it written soon. :)

EDIT: Oh, I just noticed Newo's reply. I've been filling this story with a bunch of inside jokes, but I didn't really notice any in this chapter (except perhaps the Preeminence Laser). Did you notice some I maybe accidently put in? xD

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Posted by: Newo
Date: 2008-03-08 16:29:46

I've been filling this story with a bunch of inside jokes, but I didn't really notice any in this chapter (except perhaps the Preeminence Laser). Did you notice some I maybe accidently put in? xD

There was a small reference to constructing additional pylons.

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Posted by: Don Watermeleon
Date: 2008-03-08 16:38:53
Oh, lol, that one was actually an accident (infact, I was planning a more obvious referenece to that meme in a few more chapters).

The inside joke I'm most looking forward to doing is to have Lee Nader say You Will Lose again (he said it in his introduction around Chapter 2 I think, maybe 3). Actually, I have that moment all scripted out, but you have a bunch more chapters to wait until it happens. :/

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Posted by: Phrawger
Date: 2008-03-09 14:33:32
GoldSage with millions of Pylons? I like this story even more *shot*

In all seriousness, great chapter Don. It's about time too. *bricked* ;D

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Posted by: Deokishisu
Date: 2008-03-12 22:41:22
Amazing chapter!!! ?PREEMINENCE LASER!?

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Posted by: Don Watermeleon
Date: 2008-05-31 21:21:11
Since today is 6100 + 8 Eve (Yep, it's such a big holiday that it even has an Eve), I thought I'd explain a little bit about the story before tomorrow's epic, and much overdue, chapter.

Incase you haven't noticed, all of the chapters have been taken down, because of a recent concern about using the name "Lee Nader" as the titular character, whose name resembles that of the TR's Rockin! Co-Webmaster, Lee Nader.

I will be reposting all ten of the previous chapters (Yeah, fear not, I have them all archived.) in the coming days, whenever I can get to it, but I'd like to give the follow disclaimer before Chapter 11 comes.

I will continue to use the same character names, Lee Nader, Don Watermeleon, Abwayax, etc, but it should be known that these are just characters in this story, and have no relation to people in real life who might bare the same name. The Final Solution has no intentions to offend people, though to try to create a realistic story (well, as realistic as having gods with watermelon-heads and magical jewels called Pylons), I've tried to write in believable character reactions to whatever events are occuring, than to sugarcoat this story to try to make it more mainstream.

For example, The Final Solution has no shortage of cursing, explicit violence, rascist or mysognistic remarks (heh, even the title's a bit offensive), because I'm trying to portray the characters how I truly think they'd act. So if you're a bit touchy about these subjects, just don't read the story instead of suing me or something. :)

Of course, if my story offends you in anyway, just PM me (email's not working too good at the moment), and maybe we can work something out.

There hasn't been any problems with this so far, I just thought I ought to post a warning for people, because looking at my future chapter ideas, they are sort of…offensive.

But meh, oh well, anyway, I'm just glad that TFS is finally continuing! So hip, hip, hooray for Chapter 11 tomorrow! :D

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Posted by: FooBot
Date: 2008-06-01 13:08:32
oh yes,  I can't wait.
Glad to have you back Don.