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THE FINAL SOLUTION *CONTINUED* - Page 3

Re: THE FINAL SOLUTION *CONTINUED*

Posted by: Don Watermeleon
Date: 2008-01-06 16:14:57
Bah, I wish I could post a picture. Knight's Citadel's going to seem pretty plain though once we visit the Idol's Manor in a bunch of chapters. A citadel, as you know, is a large wall that usually is guarding a city or something. The Knight's Citadel is build around the Idol's Manor, which is the home to all High Knights and the Idol of course.

Ashame I won't get a chance to write Chapter 8 until next weekend. Enjoy this one, I guess.

Re: THE FINAL SOLUTION *CONTINUED*

Posted by: Divine E
Date: 2008-01-09 12:57:21

He finally unsheathed his sword, causing a shout from Cheddar in surprise, for he had not anticipated a battle, and Divine E flung the blade carelessly yet accurately at his opposing High Knight.

But as the blade flew mid-way towards Cheddar, suddenly its momentum stopped as a gloved hand took grasp of it, and lowered it to his side. Yuzi smiled, fully anticipating Don Watermeleon to just show up like this, and again sat up in his chair to see what would go on.


Aww, I wanted to see at least on arm severed. lol. am I really that hot-headed?

Re: THE FINAL SOLUTION *CONTINUED*

Posted by: Don Watermeleon
Date: 2008-01-09 15:31:58
Nah, you're not even close to being as hot-headed, but most characters personalities have been half based on their real life self, and the other half is based on whatever would be conveinent to the story. You're an interesting character, and I think you'll like yourself, as you're not the most traditional Knight, but still one of the best.

And as long as Cheddar keeps sucking up to Don Watermeleon so well, I don't think he's going to let him lose an arm. Lucky Cheddar.  :-X

Re: THE FINAL SOLUTION *CONTINUED*

Posted by: Don Watermeleon
Date: 2008-01-12 22:39:57
Sorry about the lack of chapter today, guys. *insert generic excuse for being too busy or something*

But anyway, to make up for it, expect a super special awesome chapter, which introduces about 4-5 epic characters (one of whom made a character submittal, though I'm afraid his character was heavily editted to fit in with the stroy :P), and it also introduces the first treasonous Knights, which will be a suprisingly common plot device since TFS is somewhat based on real life, if you can believe it.

Oh yeah, and one more thing. I'm working on a TFS Forum, but it's going to take a while to finish. How does one go about hosting a Simple Machines Forum? SMF works pretty cool here, I like the style. 

Re: THE FINAL SOLUTION *CONTINUED*

Posted by: Glitchby
Date: 2008-01-14 19:18:24
Good story so far.  My only complain is I'm too "dignified" to bow to anyone :P

Re: THE FINAL SOLUTION *CONTINUED*

Posted by: Don Watermeleon
Date: 2008-01-14 19:21:59
Do you want to be demoted back to a Council Knight, mister? Yeah, didn't think so.  :P

But anyway, the next chapter's going to be waiting until next weekend, since I'm having to change up part of the plotline. I almost wish Lee Nader never was introduced as a character since writing as the Knights are far more interesting, and the first 4 chapters are always coming up to haunt me with their gaping plot holes…  :P

And also, this story Arc is dreadfully painful to write. It's interesting and all, but compared to the future ones, this Arc just can't quite compare. I'm especially excited about introducing this new antagonist guy in the GCL Arc, who's so darn beastly, he's going to literally make Don Watermeleon beat himself up. (Can't believe I'll let that happen to my character. Alas, I promised not to be bias :( )

Re: THE FINAL SOLUTION *CONTINUED*

Posted by: FooBot
Date: 2008-01-17 19:03:13
new chapter or I blow up the New Orleans Saints

Re: THE FINAL SOLUTION *CONTINUED*

Posted by: LedZeplin2
Date: 2008-01-17 19:09:43

new chapter or I blow up the New Orleans Saints


Can you blow up the Miami Dolphins too?

New chapter, new chapter!

Re: THE FINAL SOLUTION *CONTINUED*

Posted by: Missing? NO!
Date: 2008-01-17 19:46:45


new chapter or I blow up the New Orleans Saints


Can you blow up the Miami Dolphins too?

New chapter, new chapter!

Can you blow up the Steelers too?

Re: THE FINAL SOLUTION *CONTINUED*

Posted by: fivex
Date: 2008-01-18 01:13:36



new chapter or I blow up the New Orleans Saints


Can you blow up the Miami Dolphins too?

New chapter, new chapter!

Can you blow up the Steelers too?
And could you  blow up Sony, and Don Watermeleon.

Re: THE FINAL SOLUTION *CONTINUED*

Posted by: Missing? NO!
Date: 2008-01-18 08:58:15




new chapter or I blow up the New Orleans Saints


Can you blow up the Miami Dolphins too?

New chapter, new chapter!

Can you blow up the Steelers too?
And could you  blow up Sony, and Don Watermeleon.

:)

Re: THE FINAL SOLUTION *CONTINUED*

Posted by: FooBot
Date: 2008-01-18 19:40:32
If I blew up Don I'd never get the next chapter

Re: THE FINAL SOLUTION *CONTINUED*

Posted by: LedZeplin2
Date: 2008-01-18 22:35:11





new chapter or I blow up the New Orleans Saints


Can you blow up the Miami Dolphins too?

New chapter, new chapter!

Can you blow up the Steelers too?
And could you  blow up Sony, and Don Watermeleon.

:)


DON IS COOL NOW. RESPECT DON.

Re: THE FINAL SOLUTION *CONTINUED*

Posted by: Missing? NO!
Date: 2008-01-19 09:01:07






new chapter or I blow up the New Orleans Saints


Can you blow up the Miami Dolphins too?

New chapter, new chapter!

Can you blow up the Steelers too?
And could you  blow up Sony, and Don Watermeleon.

:)


DON IS COOL NOW. RESPECT DON.

:(

Re: THE FINAL SOLUTION *CONTINUED*

Posted by: LedZeplin2
Date: 2008-01-20 18:21:41







new chapter or I blow up the New Orleans Saints


Can you blow up the Miami Dolphins too?

New chapter, new chapter!

Can you blow up the Steelers too?
And could you  blow up Sony, and Don Watermeleon.

:)


DON IS COOL NOW. RESPECT DON.

:(


I am serious.